17 July 2008

Sadness

water stops
now and then
to collect thoughts
and things
dropped in passing

2 comments:

faith said...

might be ridiculous, but i just watched "be kind rewind" and this poem reminds me of that movie when jack black is magnetized, pees in the street, and all the street's scrap metal is drawn to the magnetic pee. hehe.


jdhjqiia-- the new "judge judy" of japan.

Anonymous said...

Hey man, I'm digging the short poems. I'm not artistically oriented enough to explain in detail why I like them, but I do. I really appreciate your comments on my writing. I always look forward to hearing what you have to say. The second half of the story is almost complete and I'll post as soon as its done. Miss you man.